Unwelcome

Liam stumbled backwards upstairs, oak steps bursting beneath him. “Go away, Grandma! This is my home now,” he gritted.

“The hell it ain’t. And that despicable girl has my favorite ring.” Grandma’s hiss turned his ears icy.

“Not Ava!” Mike reached for his bedroom doorknob. Ava’s muffled screams pierced through the wall. The house shook. But when Mike swung the door open, nothing was there.

Photo Courtesy of Pixabay.

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  1. mixedbag

    So spooky! and that picture, yikes!

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  2. Rohan Kachalia

    That was spooky! Can visualize it all.

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  3. Christine

    The oak steps bursting and the house shaking are great, creepy descriptions. I was a little confused by Liam vs Mike – it felt like there were maybe too many characters in such a short piece.

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    1. Danielle Dayney

      They were the same character… my bad… I had a change of heart with Mike’s name after the first draft. Thank you for commenting, though. There’s always so much love here ❤️

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      1. Christine

        AH. That makes much more sense. 🙂

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  4. d3athlily

    How spooky! Ava and the ghost disappeared? Only thing. Are Liam and Mike are the same person maybe? you changed the MC during rewrites?

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    1. Danielle Dayney

      Bah! I did… thanks for catching that 😘

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