Morning Flight

Photo courtesy of Llywelyn Nys

The rising sun had yet to meet the sky, and hues of pink changed the clouds to delicious cotton candy.  She shut the door quietly, trying not to wake her father, then flipped yesterday’s braids behind her, and tiptoed quickly off the deck.

Wet grass slipped between her bare toes as she ran toward the towering tree.

Once there, her small hands tugged at the ropes, pulling herself to sit on the wood, hand-carved by her papa.  She tipped her head, purple nightgown soaring behind her like a cape. Her toes touched the coveted sky.

Often, she dreamt of flying.

19 responses to “Morning Flight”

  1. d3athlily Avatar

    I love the beautiful picture you painted here. I could see every detail perfectly.

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  2. hemasmixedbag Avatar
    hemasmixedbag

    There is such a airy, lyrical quality to this piece, Danielle! It’s beautiful.

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  3. Me Otherwise Avatar

    Ah! her papa, the wind beneath her wings!!!! Brilliant!

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    1. Danielle Dayney Avatar

      Glad you liked it =)

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  4. Jennifer G. Knoblock Avatar

    I love all the details here–texture, color. I’m suddenly wishing I had a swing (and a non-icky-humid sunrise)!

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    1. Danielle Dayney Avatar

      Thanks, Jennifer!

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  5. Beeray Avatar

    Beautiful. Love how you described and love how I am able to actually picture it. Flawless.

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  6. innatejames Avatar

    I really like the leap you took between the third and last paragraphs and the conflict you created underneath the joyous moment. Really nice work, Danielle!

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    1. Danielle Dayney Avatar

      Thank you, Nate! Glad you liked it.

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  7. saroful Avatar

    I used to swing for HOURS as a kid.

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    1. Danielle Dayney Avatar

      Me too. I remember it feeling like freedom.

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  9. lshandlefox Avatar

    This reminded me of when I was a kid and brought back that sensation of flying on a swing…oh the freedom… Thanks

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    1. Danielle Dayney Avatar

      Glad you liked it!

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  10. Mel Avatar

    Beautiful. I felt transported by this.

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    1. Danielle Dayney Avatar

      Thanks, Melissa! Glad you liked it.

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